Two Deaths In Suburbia: An Original Short Story
Neil with a beautiful German Shepherd. They both are appearing to giving the side-eye, most likely due to Neil's insistence that these shots work much better in black and white. |
Watching Your Show Of Show, I Love Lucy |
Here's a weary picture from the past of a housewife having to use one of those usless carpet vacuums that basically did absolutely nothing. |
How to hold a baby. It doesn't appear to have one of those "Jolly Jumpers" that take the place of this woman who often had to multi-task. Looks like fun. |
I didn't sign up for this. All I do is cook, do laundry and tell my husband how wonderful he is. Screw this crap. But is there a way out?? |
Are the depressed housewives deveoping a rebellious streak? |
In all it's tepid glory. |
Sharon Anderson was fed up. Completely burned out from her supposedly happy life in her golden cage, swallowing her pride and affixing a smile that frighteningly appeared as a twisted rictus grin. She hadn't signed up for this. Like many other suburban prisoners, Sarah had naively stepped into quicksand and it didn't take very long for her to see exactly what she was up against: Subserviance. And no way out. Could she be the only housewife who felt this way? Staring blankly at soap operas and sitcoms as she ran her iron over her husband's shirts, white shirts that had to be starched; but not too starched or David would tell her that they were "too stiff". David complained many, many times that the sewing machine he'd given his wife was gathering dust. "You do know what it's for, don't you?"
"Yes. I know what it's purpose is, David. But I don't understand why we can't just go to the mall and buy clothes. We have the money. Your job pays well--at least thats's what you tell me."
Sarah's mind snapped back into reality. She would just love to be able to tell her husband what was on her mind, but would never want to "rock the boat." After all, David provided well, the rent payments were never late. His job as a defense attorney was incredibly stressful, having to duke it out with the prosecutor, knowing that he had to prove that an oftender wasn't guilty, when it was obvious that, more times than not, that he or she had committed an often gruesome crime.
This family was hanging by a thread. There didn't seem to be any disarming abuse, whether it be emotional, psychological or physical. Anyone gazing upon the rows and rows of seemingly identical houses wouldn't bat an eye. This was suburban paradise, wasn't it? Housewives all over America and Great Britain should be thrilled, right?
Sharon never surrendered to the "suburban dream", even though she was forced to keep her rebellious side to herself, of course. She couldn't tell any of her friends, bridge even the paperboy. That may seem like there was an unhealthy dose of paranoia in her head-----but there needed to be. After all, Sharon had no idea where she would go to live. She realised that she had no money, save for cleaning products, vacuum bags---well, you get the picture. She didn't even have any plans. David rarely took his wife out to the movies, to a restaurant or anywhere for that matter. Sharon longed for the freedom to go into a movie theatre and sit there all day, even if the same film was played over and over. But it was just a dream, a wish that could never be fulfilled. Sarah then left to pick up her children from school. Amilia was an outgoing and engaging child who made friends easily and was years ahead of her actual age of eight. Her younger brother, Luka had just turned six last week. Unlike his sister, Luka was very shy, had few friends and spent a lot of time to himself, not because he enjoyed it, but because it was his sancuary against the stifling suburban atmosphere that seemed to depress the little guy.
Although he was only six, Luka had an uncanny ability to see through the thick fog of oppression that engulfed his family: He saw how unhappy his mother was, how his father told her what to do all the time and essentially kept her hostage in the so-called "lap of luxury." The Andersons prided themselves on being the first neighbours to own a TV. There were only black and white ones, but that didn't really matter. David belonged to The Hunt Club, went golfing every Saturday, drove an expensive car and as for their house, well, it stood out from the others because of its size and its staggering beauty.
Now, nothing much had really changed. David wanted an inground swimming pool, but it was no secret that he needed that to round out the portrait of "perfection" more than anything. Little Luka wasn't fooled. He approached his father one afternoon, as they sat on the front porch and asked, " So is Mom going to swim in it too?"
David smiled and responded, "as long as she's a good girl."
"Good girl", for God's sake! You don't treat Mommy very well."
Instead of continuing the rather awkward conversation, David got up, grabbed the newspaper and headed inside. What a coward, thought Luka in disgust. Something has to be done, but I'm just a kid. Nobody would take me seriously anyway. Mom rarely smiled anymore and was perpetually tired from her many "duties". There had to be something he could do. Maybe there is, he mused, a smile spreading over his face. Maybe there is."
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"Yes. I know what it's purpose is, David. But I don't understand why we can't just go to the mall and buy clothes. We have the money. Your job pays well--at least thats's what you tell me."
Sarah's mind snapped back into reality. She would just love to be able to tell her husband what was on her mind, but would never want to "rock the boat." After all, David provided well, the rent payments were never late. His job as a defense attorney was incredibly stressful, having to duke it out with the prosecutor, knowing that he had to prove that an oftender wasn't guilty, when it was obvious that, more times than not, that he or she had committed an often gruesome crime.
This family was hanging by a thread. There didn't seem to be any disarming abuse, whether it be emotional, psychological or physical. Anyone gazing upon the rows and rows of seemingly identical houses wouldn't bat an eye. This was suburban paradise, wasn't it? Housewives all over America and Great Britain should be thrilled, right?
Sharon never surrendered to the "suburban dream", even though she was forced to keep her rebellious side to herself, of course. She couldn't tell any of her friends, bridge even the paperboy. That may seem like there was an unhealthy dose of paranoia in her head-----but there needed to be. After all, Sharon had no idea where she would go to live. She realised that she had no money, save for cleaning products, vacuum bags---well, you get the picture. She didn't even have any plans. David rarely took his wife out to the movies, to a restaurant or anywhere for that matter. Sharon longed for the freedom to go into a movie theatre and sit there all day, even if the same film was played over and over. But it was just a dream, a wish that could never be fulfilled. Sarah then left to pick up her children from school. Amilia was an outgoing and engaging child who made friends easily and was years ahead of her actual age of eight. Her younger brother, Luka had just turned six last week. Unlike his sister, Luka was very shy, had few friends and spent a lot of time to himself, not because he enjoyed it, but because it was his sancuary against the stifling suburban atmosphere that seemed to depress the little guy.
Although he was only six, Luka had an uncanny ability to see through the thick fog of oppression that engulfed his family: He saw how unhappy his mother was, how his father told her what to do all the time and essentially kept her hostage in the so-called "lap of luxury." The Andersons prided themselves on being the first neighbours to own a TV. There were only black and white ones, but that didn't really matter. David belonged to The Hunt Club, went golfing every Saturday, drove an expensive car and as for their house, well, it stood out from the others because of its size and its staggering beauty.
Now, nothing much had really changed. David wanted an inground swimming pool, but it was no secret that he needed that to round out the portrait of "perfection" more than anything. Little Luka wasn't fooled. He approached his father one afternoon, as they sat on the front porch and asked, " So is Mom going to swim in it too?"
David smiled and responded, "as long as she's a good girl."
"Good girl", for God's sake! You don't treat Mommy very well."
Instead of continuing the rather awkward conversation, David got up, grabbed the newspaper and headed inside. What a coward, thought Luka in disgust. Something has to be done, but I'm just a kid. Nobody would take me seriously anyway. Mom rarely smiled anymore and was perpetually tired from her many "duties". There had to be something he could do. Maybe there is, he mused, a smile spreading over his face. Maybe there is."
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